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美國高中留學(xué)的個(gè)人陳述怎么寫

相信很多留學(xué)美國高中的同學(xué)在寫個(gè)人陳述的時(shí)候都覺得無從下筆,今天培訓(xùn)啦的小編要給大家介紹的,就是關(guān)于美國高中留學(xué)的個(gè)人陳述,應(yīng)該有些什么內(nèi)容和注意事項(xiàng)。
精心安排美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述和其它文件的關(guān)系
個(gè)人文書,推薦信,簡歷等文件構(gòu)成一整套申請文件系統(tǒng),既需要相互應(yīng)證,也需要這些文件各有側(cè)重點(diǎn)。因此在寫作這些文件之前必須總體構(gòu)思安排文章的布局和每個(gè)文件突出的重點(diǎn)。許多申請人將本該由簡歷或推薦信突出的內(nèi)容放在個(gè)人陳述中,這樣不但造成信息的無效重復(fù),同時(shí)弱化了個(gè)人陳述應(yīng)起的作用。
語言表達(dá)層面上一定要用地道的英語
美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述避免按中文的語言邏輯寫成的"中式英語",用詞句式避免過于夸張,古怪,不符合英語的思維習(xí)慣和文風(fēng)。完成的文件最好由母語人士進(jìn)行修改。
美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述的長度
美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述要短小精悍,內(nèi)容豐滿,文筆優(yōu)美。
一般來說一篇美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述的正常長度為600—800英文單詞,而相當(dāng)多申請人的美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述超長,試圖把自己的方方面面的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和成績展示出來。
結(jié)構(gòu)簡單,銜接緊密,主線明確,便于理解
"Simple
is
the
best
"請記住,招生人員每天要讀大量的申請資料,只有那種簡單有力重點(diǎn)突出的的文章才能打動招生人員。留學(xué)文書其實(shí)是您個(gè)人的廣告,您仔細(xì)想想,給您留下深刻印象的廣告哪個(gè)不是簡明而有力的。中國申請人往往傾向于把自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)不分主次全都告訴招生人員,導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果就是招生人員對你的整體印象的模糊。美國高中申請個(gè)人陳述寫作一定要有重點(diǎn)。
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出國留學(xué)簡歷書寫方法?

出國留學(xué)簡歷是所有高校申請必備的材料之一。它高度概括了你的學(xué)習(xí)以及工作生涯,并屬于高校招生委員會首先要閱讀的材料之一。換句話說,留學(xué)簡歷就好像你的一張臉,代表著你的形象。那么如何讓這張臉更漂亮、更吸引人呢。一份完整的出國留學(xué)簡歷簡歷應(yīng)該包涵至少幾點(diǎn)信息。
1.個(gè)人信息個(gè)人信息出現(xiàn)在你簡歷最顯著的位置,一般放在上方中間。寫上你的姓名:Mr./Ms.XX名字下方留你的聯(lián)系方式:地址、電話、電子郵箱等。
2.教育背景教育背景一般出現(xiàn)在簡歷的第二部分。而對于那些工作多年后重返學(xué)校的申請人來說,也可以考慮把教育背景放在自己的工作背景之后描述。教育背景對于申請本科的學(xué)生來講可以從高中寫起,而研究生申請者,從本科寫起即可。
教育背景以及工作背景等都參照年份順序,從最近的經(jīng)歷寫起(這一點(diǎn)和中文簡歷有所不同)。教育背景包涵一下內(nèi)容:畢業(yè)學(xué)校名稱、入校日期和畢業(yè)日期、專業(yè)以及所獲學(xué)位名稱、在校成績(GPA不高的學(xué)可以不提及)。
3.學(xué)術(shù)成果這項(xiàng)包涵你所發(fā)表的論文,參加過的學(xué)術(shù)會議等?!≡跁鴮懩愕膶W(xué)術(shù)成果時(shí)最好采用正規(guī)的Reference*格式,這樣會叫你發(fā)表的文章顯得更專業(yè)。*例如:Saussure.F.de.1983.CourseinGeneralLinguistics[M],ed.C.Bally&A.Sechehaye,trans.R.Harris.London:Duckworth.
4.工作經(jīng)歷你的正式工作以及實(shí)習(xí)、兼職經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含:工作起止日期、工作單位的名稱、職務(wù)范圍、簡述工作內(nèi)容(一般2-3句,概括一下你的職責(zé))
5.科研經(jīng)歷這里主要提醒一些理工科學(xué)生,你在實(shí)驗(yàn)室協(xié)助老師做的實(shí)驗(yàn)和項(xiàng)目都屬于這一項(xiàng)。與工作經(jīng)歷相仿,你也要寫明科研課題,起止時(shí)間,你所承擔(dān)的工作等等。簡歷里的科研經(jīng)歷最好是與所要申請的專業(yè)相關(guān)。
6.英語考試成績這里你需要提供你的托福、雅思、GRE或其他語言成績填寫時(shí)注意注明你獲得該分?jǐn)?shù)的時(shí)間。
7.所獲獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)和榮譽(yù) 列舉你大學(xué)期間和工作期間所獲得過的獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)。本科申請者可把你高中時(shí)期的榮譽(yù)寫在上面,過早的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)與榮譽(yù)如果不是非常重要的,最好不要寫。
8.業(yè)余活動(非必需)如果你的課余生活很豐富,并且在有所建樹的話,這里可以適當(dāng)提及,比如你的愛好,你所鐘愛的運(yùn)動等等。但是如果你的簡歷已經(jīng)滿滿當(dāng)當(dāng)?shù)脑捘敲催@項(xiàng)最好省掉。因?yàn)樗c你的申請不直接掛鉤。完成簡歷以后要注意調(diào)整你的格式,盡量讓你的簡歷看上去緊湊而整潔。當(dāng)然最后的步驟就是反復(fù)檢查,切莫叫小錯(cuò)誤影響你簡歷的質(zhì)量。
PS:如果你認(rèn)為以上簡歷中的某一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容特別重要,可以單獨(dú)放在最前面顯眼的位置突出該項(xiàng)。
最后,提醒大家出國留學(xué)簡歷應(yīng)該是簡練和高度概括的,一般來說篇幅不宜超過2頁。而對于經(jīng)歷并不算豐富的學(xué)生申請人來講,1頁的簡歷也很常見。這里有個(gè)誤區(qū),很多學(xué)生認(rèn)為簡歷越長顯得你越牛。其實(shí)不然,很多篇幅長卻缺乏實(shí)際內(nèi)容的簡歷反而會招致閱讀者的煩感。因此如果你確實(shí)經(jīng)歷有限,你可以選擇寫單頁簡歷,并緊湊合理的安排這一頁紙的內(nèi)容,那么你的簡歷一樣可以非常優(yōu)秀。
成功面試的方法

出國留學(xué)怎么寫簡歷

通常會包括以下幾部分:

個(gè)人基本信息:包括姓名,性別,出生日期,聯(lián)系方式等等;

學(xué)歷基本信息:至少包括大學(xué)信息;

工作經(jīng)歷:如有,包括畢業(yè)之后各個(gè)公司的任職期限,職務(wù)等;

獲獎(jiǎng)經(jīng)歷:包括在校和在職期間獲得的榮譽(yù);

科研經(jīng)歷:如有;

興趣愛好等額外信息:有助于學(xué)校了解你的信息。

請?zhí)峁┮粋€(gè)個(gè)人申請出國的英文簡歷模版

呵呵 真巧 我正在申請出國 有個(gè)模板 一會發(fā)上來
非常非常.....經(jīng)典的模板!!!!! 好好研究啊 不懂的留言
全是我一個(gè)字母一個(gè)字母打上來的 累死了 呵呵
Dear professor_____,
I have read the annual prospectus issued by your school and found that it has the best graduate program of _____
I am greatly interested in the program and hope that i could do my Doctor/Master degree under your instruction.
I am working that at the_____department of _____university
I have developed my people skills as well as the abilities in ______
Also,I have learned to appreciate the spirit of _____that is supremely important in my work.
I graduated from _____majoring in _______
In college I took such courses as _______
My english is excellent
I was a major member of several campus clubs including _____
Two of my former professors and the present dean of our department have kindly written letters of recommendation for me,as enclosed with this letter.
I would be very grateful if you could send me the necessary forms and any information about financial aid in your program.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours ,
signature

高中出國留學(xué)的個(gè)人陳述申請?jiān)趺磳???/h3>這種情況只能你自己去寫,別人替不了。給你些參考材料看一下吧,一個(gè)是寫給簽證官的,一個(gè)是推薦信,特別是推薦信,把你想要的內(nèi)容基本都寫出來了,很有參考價(jià)值:
一、學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃
Dear isa Officer,
My name is Deng Peng. I graduated from No. 1 Middle School of Changsha, Hunan Province in July 2002.
I had two alternatives to choose before high school graduation last: either to take part in the national collegiate examination in order to receive college education in China, or to select a school of a developed country for further schooling. My family had very careful discussion on selection of these two alternatives. At the end of thorough considerations, the whole family decided that I should go abroad for advanced education.
Owning a number of large and medium scale coal mines, my father is a famous private entrepreneur in Changsha. As his company keeps on growing and the business becomes more sophisticated, my father is now badly in need of good specialists of business management to help him manage and operate the business. My father decided to let me go abroad for advanced schooling so that I would be able to assist him in the family business using the advanced management knowledge I would learn abroad.
Besides, I have consulted my high school teachers, who not only support my decision but also further suggest me to choose a good Canadian school.
I know it is more expensive to have such advanced education in abroad than in China. Financing is not a problem to my family. My parents have enough financial resources to pay for all the expenses necessary for the four-year educational program in Canada including the round tickets.
After careful studies of the alternative schools, I finally come to identify Sprott-Shaw Community College at Vancouver. I know that this college, founded in 1903, will have its century celebration in this June. Currently there are 2376 well-trained faculties and about 4000 students. It has altogether 20 branches all over BC Province. Another thing about this college that is interesting to me is that there are very few Chinese students, no more than 2 in each class on average.
I have applied for the program on business management. To complete this program, I have the following plan: before starting the specialty program, I will complete the ESL courses. After admission I will have an English language test, and will be arranged to the proper class according to my English level. I will also have language test in every month in order to see the progress of the language proficiency. When I have reached the intermediate level, I will be able to start the specialty courses. Then I plan to choose the following subjects: business study and management, business and finance, marketing theories and marketing strategies, human resource management, etc. After spending two years at Sprott-Shaw Community College, I will select a proper university for advanced bachelor courses. For instance, I may select BCIT or AU of Canada.
Upon completion of the program in Canada, I will come back to China to help my father with the family business. While working in my father's company, I will start from the lowest level have good practice and use all that I will have learnt at Canada.
I am very confident in the future, although I understand that schooling abroad may be very difficult. It will require greater efforts to accomplish the program in abroad than in China. But I am prepared for that. In this January I participated in the TV college program for training in computer application, as I know that it is almost impossible to study the program without computer knowledge. I am now trying to gain more knowledge and experience on computer application, besides, I spend all my spare time on English study.
Canada is a peaceful and lovely country. Studying at Sprott-Shaw Community College will be very important to me, for it means another significant start of my life. Please trust me that after completing the program in Canada, I will be able to operate and manage the business of Hunan Xiangyuan Fuels & Investment Co., Ltd. much better than my father.
Yours faithfully,
Applicant: Deng Peng
二、老師的推薦信
Sir or Madam:
It is a pleasure for me to provide an evaluation in support of the application of Mr. Cai Yubiao, whom I have known for six years and taught English for three years in middle school. Later I acted as counselor of his class and he became my friend. I have full understanding of him in many aspects and I can say responsibly that he is a rare excellent student our school has produced.
Mr. Cai impressed first of all with his distinguished scholastic performance and his all-round development. He is almost a hero-like character on the campus. He is widely recognized, for his rank of always being one of the top five in various tests and exams, for his well-balanced development in all fields, for his broad horizon which is rarely found in other students. As a result, he had been conferred with the title of "Student of Excellence" for three consecutive years, the highest honor in most Chinese high schools. His mastery of computer science, which is far above school requirement and even higher than some of the college students, is most talked about and admired by both the school faculty and students. What especially surprised me is that his tutor in the computer contest told me that he obtained such achievement solely through his painstaking self-education. It is already beyond his teachers to offer him any advanced knowledge.
It is undeniable that Mr. Cai is very talented. But he achieved succeeded not simply out of his talents but more out of his diligence. When he first entered the 7th grade, he was just an average student. Now, he is especially admired for his piles of achievements in various highest-level contests and competitions. The prizes such as 1st place winner in National Olympics for Informatics, 2nd place winner in National Olympics for Mathematics, 3rd place winner in Provincial Olympics for Chemistry are only a few of the items. The reason for such a drastic improvement is that he has mastered effective learning methods which enhanced his scholastic aptitudes. Comment in common about him is that he is a person with a tightly packed schedule that is scientifically and reasonably made. "Less time, better work" or "Play while play, work while work" is what many of his peers describe of him jealously. He is so impressive for his well-planned and efficient studies. A colleague of mine once told me that a boy living in the opposite building would read English aloud for two hours every evening and play half an hour badminton and then go to bed. She said she very much appreciate the persistence of such a student. This student is Mr. Cai and my colleague's description has convincingly explained why Mr. Cai excels his classmates in English.
Being enthusiastic about his work, earnest in learning, he is also full of passion and initiative. What has always been talked about among the school faculty is about the days when Chai Yibiao squeezed out time to search through the web for teaching materials and worked deep into the nights to integrate them into multimedia animations and other forms of teaching aids and this product is now well-kept as a token of the valuable friendship between teacher and student, also the achievement made by students now being repeatedly used in class. For the past 6 years, together with his classmates, Mr. Cai often paid visits to the community welfare center to extend greetings and best wishes to the old people. He is also ever ready to show his love and care to each classmate.
As a matter of fact, he has been tutoring one of them in a one-to-one manner for a non-stop three years, for as much as 5 hours a week, which has now been an anecdote in the school.
Rather than score-oriented, he does equally well in after-school activities. The tutor of his extracurricular astronomy project recalled when Mr. Cai first joined the project as a 4th grader in primary school, he looked very small. When asked "Will you feel afraid to make observations deep into night in the wilderness?" he answered with courage: "Not in the least." By now, he has made 8-year efforts to do astronomical observations, even during the final year of his senior middle school when the coursework is so heavy. In other related aspects, Mr. Cai led his class's volleyball team to win the championship in the all-school man's volleyball league match and he himself won several first prizes in the long- and medium-distance running events at the school's sports meet. He represented our school at the two major English speech tests, one provincial-level and the other municipal-level, in which he won the 4th prize and first prize respectively.
In a word, he is a remarkable person. Not only his intelligence, but his maturity and willingness to help other people are really unusual, especially among high school seniors. Of course, he is by no means perfect. As a student of less than 20 years old, he has great potential to be tapped.
Therefore, he needs to be put into a more challenging environment to enrich and improve himself. An outstanding student needs an excellent academic environment and I believe that your esteemed university will surely provide the best study conditions.
At the same time,I strongly believe he will make a great learner, scholar and hopefully, a great man. I sincerely wish that his application could be most seriously and favorably considered.

我想出國留學(xué)啊~~英文簡歷怎么寫?。壳竽0鍉~!

這是我覺得比較好的一個(gè)模板,僅供參考:
Dear professor_____,
I have read the annual prospectus issued by your school and found that it has the best graduate program of _____
I am greatly interested in the program and hope that i could do my Doctor/Master degree under your instruction.
I am working that at the_____department of _____university
I have developed my people skills as well as the abilities in ______
Also,I have learned to appreciate the spirit of _____that is supremely important in my work.
I graduated from _____majoring in _______
In college I took such courses as _______
My english is excellent
I was a major member of several campus clubs including _____
Two of my former professors and the present dean of our department have kindly written letters of recommendation for me,as enclosed with this letter.
I would be very grateful if you could send me the necessary forms and any information about financial aid in your program.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours ,

雅思考試 托福考試 留學(xué)攻略 留學(xué)院校庫

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