教你打造地道托福寫作

句子：

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改進(jìn)：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory. 》》點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入在線測試小課堂

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main
job.

改進(jìn)：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your
career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改進(jìn): They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 》》點(diǎn)擊領(lǐng)取免費(fèi)在線試聽課程

改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet
with it.

以上是考生們在托福寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的*式英語經(jīng)過修改后的地道英語的對比，從中找出不同來知道地道英語到底怎么寫的，從而運(yùn)用到托福寫作中。

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